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"You have to fall in love with the process to become great"-Unknown
This week I had my section 2 and 3 revised by the man Dr Mangini himself. That really helped my writing process and my work. I produced a much better essay because I was so blind to these things. Help can come from anyone, always view the cristism has constrctive because if you dont your feelings will be hurt. But the truth hurts but it does help in many ways. We did this in ALP and i thought making a post out of it might help out you guys with your process's. So check out my shitty first drafts because we all have them. Enjoy!
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In this blog post I will be doing this via Vlog from youtube. I will be going over my second draft of my narrative project. In it I will answer a few questions but here are a few readings that helped me answer them: What is Fan Fiction -- and why is it making people nervous? (Stephen Downes), a link to Rewinding and Rewriting: The Alternate Universes in Our Head (Hidden Brain Podcast). Now lets get into the video. Enjoy! In this post I will be sharing a poem I constructed from my narrative project. I took out words and phrases from my narrative
project to make this poem. What is a Found Poem? | Sample Found Poem | Visual Examples of Found Poems these readings helped create my poem in the best way I can. I hope you all can enjoy this reading as much as I had making it. Change Is Now Here comes the referee shaking, holding the glowing orange ball, Something doesn’t feel right, like I have a string on it, It has landed in my hands, All these goosebumps flow down my body. Uh-oh, I felt this sharp pain in my knee. I see everyone staring at me, lying on this cold but dusty hardwood floor. I sit here in despair, heartbroken, This is tearing me apart… I felt helpless, the nerves are a little shaky. I felt so detached like someone just took away my sense of being. I might never be the same again. Section II: Do you think the narrative provides enough descriptive language to create a compelling found poem?~ I personally do believe my narrative uses enough descriptive language to where the audience understands me. Do you think the descriptive language more so creates a setting or delivers the subtext of a theme?~ I think it creates a little bit of both but you have to dive deep to fully understand. |
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